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A girl named solemn

March 23, 2012
By RamonaThePunkRocker GOLD, Henderson, Nevada
RamonaThePunkRocker GOLD, Henderson, Nevada
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Solemn was the name of the lomesome figure walking down the hall, unaware of every student, locker, and teacher she past. No one aknowledged her exisitence as she was the out cast, mistfit. People saw her as impure and hazardous to their social lifes. Never seen as reliable, inviting, or intriging .
The pride of students walked by clawing at her like cats of the amazon, the blame game seemed to be their middle name. Hurting solemn with harsh words and rumors.
Ignorance wonders by. He hears the noised the words the sounds but ignores, because ofcoarse this is his god given nature. Solemn cries out for help. Ignorance doesn't look up. This was his camoflage his slow way to kill his prey. The silent enemy.
Solemn felt alone, betrayed....she couldn't go on. "Is their a door, an exit?" She seemed to ask the world. "or is this eternal suffering."
Solemn ran banging on every door tears falling from her eyes. Suddenlly she sees a neon red sign through blury eyes..."The exit."
Solemn stumbled forward opening the door looking out. The warm but firm hands of death take her soul to a place of peace rest....freedom....she sighed closing her light blue eyes.

The author's comments:
I wrote this for a warm up and decided to edit it. This is my final piece. Although i suck at grammer i tryed my best

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on Mar. 27 2012 at 7:48 pm
lies50percent BRONZE, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm astounded by people who want to 'know' the universe when it's hard enough to find your way around Chinatown." - W.A.

I liked what you were doing, but... it seemed riddled with typos...unless that was the point? Sorry to be that guy. :(

on Mar. 27 2012 at 7:33 pm
Zaraclaylime DIAMOND, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
So I suppose my simple advice is: Love your life. I only say that because your life is what you have to give.
-Tom Hiddleston

weird, but meaningful. i liked it.