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Unspoken Passion (Final Part)

February 26, 2010
By cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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Soon people began to notice that Nate was changing. He was never anything but happy, and even his hockey skills improved. The relationship between Tacy and Nate grew so strong; they had a bond that could never be broken. When the other girls at school found out that is was Tacy who was putting Nate in this mood, Tacy experienced the drama she said she wish she could have.

Nate noticed the change in attitude in all the girls. When Tacy came up in conversation, which always happened with Nate, the girls whispered and shared looks that could kill. Nate knew there wasn’t a problem with Tacy so they would have to get over it. His heart told him he loved her.

Tacy began to think that many of the girls thought she was deaf instead of mute. Whenever they saw Tacy, even when she was with her family, they would say the rudest things. The ridicule never seemed to cease. Even with the girl’s fake smiles and their flirty hugs on Nate, Tacy’s heart told her she loved Him. And thats all they needed.

The author's comments:
Im kind of sorry to say this is over. I am through with Unspoken Passion unless yall absolutley beg for more, which i doubt will happen. =) Thanks for supporting & Commenting while i wrote this, it meant the world to me!

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fireswatter said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 5:12 pm
fireswatter, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“I cannot sleep unless I am surrounded by books.”
― Jorge Luis Borges

Oh my goodness! you cant stop I love it! I BEG YOU!

on Aug. 26 2011 at 11:10 pm
meleavvelenata SILVER, Seattle, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent" ~ Eleanor Roosevelt
"Sorry, I couldn't hear you over the sound of my freedom" ~ Harmony
"Nobody can hurt me without my permission" ~ Mahatma Gandhi
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on Sep. 22 2010 at 11:39 pm
SingLaughLove16, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isnt about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning to dance in the rain."

You are an excellent writer! Never stop! :)

on Jun. 24 2010 at 12:15 pm
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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Okayy, M i'll try. but first, my dad has to find all my documents on my laptop that dissapeared because of a virus. If i dont have the documents, i dont have my writing...and i kinda need that. & im working on Never Saw You Coming...thats my main focus rightt now..so I'll try.

on Jun. 24 2010 at 10:36 am
GreenEyedGirl15 BRONZE, Derby, Kansas
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on Apr. 25 2010 at 7:49 pm
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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I may consider it when my school work and stuff calms down. =) thanks for letting me know that you enjoy my writing! =) it is GREATLY appreciated!!

on Apr. 25 2010 at 4:21 pm
Ebonykitty SILVER, Naples, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
You can't run out of dreams. Dreams are the start of everything...

I love Unspoken Passion! Pleeeease write more!!!

on Apr. 14 2010 at 4:53 pm
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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Did you read the other parts before this one?

on Apr. 13 2010 at 10:38 am
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be" -anonymous

I loved this! Great job! I know I want more! haha :) keep writing you are an amazing writer