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i dont belive in fairytales

October 7, 2009
By uniqke PLATINUM, Cleveland, Ohio
uniqke PLATINUM, Cleveland, Ohio
30 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best way to call on yuor guardian angel,is to laugh."

-Michael Jackson

both of us standing in the rain,his hands in mine and my lips on his.every thing felt like a fairytale.in my head i hear our song"superhuman"thats exactly how i feel,superhuman.my head now on his shoulders and his arms around me i say"micheal do u hear the music to?"its quiet for a minute.i lft my head to look at him."micheal?"a small smile grows on his face, he looks up.gesturing me to look to.i look up and there is a radio which is where the music is coming from,and up in the sky is a big blimp reading"lisa will you marry me?"i turn around look at him so confused,then turn back to the blimp.i feel his hand slip into mine and he kneels down.i turn and he says'lisa will you marry me?"i start to cry.he stands and says"lisa what is wrong?"my head down and his hands in mine i say."micheal,what if i told you that i dont belive in fairytales?"he starts to speak and i relize that he is saying my quote but in a way he changed it."what happens when he is your princecharming....and you are his cinderrella?..his fingers slowly come to my chin and he lifts up my head and says"fairytales become real."i look at him and he smiles.but emediently i look back down.i say"micheal how do i know that things are gunna change?"he hugs me and says"lisa please belive me.""no"i say"i dont think i can."i look at him he looks so confused.i kiss him on the cheek and say"goodbye micheal"i start to walk away our hands gentaly pull apart.shockingly he says"please lisa i think im in love with you!"i turn,looking liek i just got my heart broken all over agian."he walks up to me and says"i think im STILL inlove with you."i look at him sadly and say"why do you want to hurt me?"he takes my hands and says "i dont want to hurt you"i pull my hands back and say "micheal im not stupid!!that i love crap is exactly what you said the day we got together,may 4th 2009 and look what happened!""yes!look what happened!!"he says"im standing here asking you to marry me on MAY 4HT.""but what about the heart break before all this"i say and then i add"on may 4th!"its quiet and then i relize that today is may 4th.i go to talk but before i can say anything micheal says"happy anivercery lisa"he smiles i look so confused.i say "today is our anivercery.and you remembered?""yea"he says "but where is this all coming from"i say"i mean you didnt want any thing to do wi-"im interupted by a sudden kiss.it feels so wrong but feels so right.my this time we are both soaked but we dont care.its funny.all this time ive been telling myself not to belive in fairy tales.but yet my whole life has been one.
micheal and lisa got marryed and had to children ashjayla-ranee uniqke jackins and david micheal j jackins.they are both famouse singers and live a wonderfull life.so what really happens when he is your prince charming but your not his cinderrella?....they live happily ever after

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on Apr. 2 2011 at 7:22 pm
Haley_Elizabeth GOLD, Wallingford, Vermont
12 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Embrace imperfection rather than hide your flaws."

This definately need a lot of work. You need to work on spelling and punctuation. Also when different people talk you should make different paragraphs. And you should put at least one space after a period before writing again. Everythings really tight. And i wouldn't have said PS or The End. 

But this story is definately orginial. And it has a lot of style, people like that:)

on Mar. 2 2011 at 11:36 am
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
7 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

this story needs some serious work as far as grammar and punctuation and stuff. i think the story line is good but it needs cleaning up. big time.

on Feb. 18 2010 at 6:46 pm
armygirl22 GOLD, Brandon, Florida
13 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i finally understand what true love really means. love means that you care for another person's happiness more than your own, no matter how painful the choices you face might be.

this story was a really good one, it kept me nervous, and the ending was great. :) yes, the puncuation and everything could have been better, but it was really good. :) great job.

on Feb. 13 2010 at 10:00 pm
monstrosity BRONZE, Hood River, Oregon
1 article 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who laughs last didn't get it.

Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings.

Is it good if a vacuum really sucks?

lol ya it was a cut story but extremely hard to read...

jatz318 SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 7:45 pm
jatz318 SILVER, East Brunswick, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 24 comments
Maybe I could read this if you wrote in proper english...with grammar, punctuation, capitalization, and spelling.

on Jan. 14 2010 at 6:36 pm
Amanda Fox BRONZE, Naples, Florida
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I can't even read this!

on Oct. 28 2009 at 10:25 am
uniqke PLATINUM, Cleveland, Ohio
30 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best way to call on yuor guardian angel,is to laugh."

-Michael Jackson

thanx,i worked really hard on it!maybe one day it will come true for me.oh i dont worrie one day you will find your cinderrella=]

StinelliT said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 8:05 pm
This story was so touching and made me wonder if I ever will meet my Cinderella. When you see the blimp saying "Lisa, will you marry me?" made me smile and the thought that was very creative. I still don't know why you said "I don't believe in fairytales." If you love the guy just say yes! I loved how he rememberd your anniversery and planned to ask you on that exact day. It was a GREAT story but for future reference, proofread your story because you had a some errors where I had to fill in the blanks.

Free 2 write said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 7:44 pm
WOW now that was deep SOOOOO powerfull. I luvd it :-)

auna123 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 2:59 pm
auna123 BRONZE, Bethel, Alaska
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Education is what survives when what has been learnt has been forgotten." B.F. skinner

that was an amazing story it goes so deep great work