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Opening to a Sci-fi/Fantasy Story

October 19, 2011
By PlagueRat GOLD, Upton, Wirral, Other
PlagueRat GOLD, Upton, Wirral, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Black Veil Brides will stand strong for you we will take on the worlds hatred so that you don’t have to. Live your life, listen you your music way to loud, be as crazy and as "different" as you want to be and always remember you’re not alone." - Andy Biersack

Everything seems more sinister when you are afraid, that's why in my line of work you have the fear trained out of you. But no matter how long you train for no-one can ever be completely fearless. Fear is the one thing from which you cannot hide. I was stupid and thought I was fearless... Oh how wrong I was. For I did not know what lurked in dark corners and hid in closets. Everyone remembers those "stories" you got told when you were younger about monsters, ghosts and ghouls but when you grow up you know that they weren't real. You were wrong, they're all real.

The author's comments:
I love writing spontaneously and that's what this is. So please take a look and leave a comment to tell me what you think (criticism and ideas for improvement are welcome!)

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on Oct. 25 2011 at 3:55 pm
SomethingLikeFire BRONZE, Mchenry, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Pippin: What about elevenses? Luncheon? Afternoon tea? Dinner? Supper? He knows about them, doesn't he?" -
-- The Lord Of The Rings: The Fellowship Of The Ring

omigod....what happens!?! keep going with it.

peaceloveout said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 5:37 pm
This is great! It has a ton of potential to make an amazing sci-fi/fantasy story. keep up the great work :)