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Peanut Butter and Jelly

October 20, 2016
By Rafthecompass BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
Rafthecompass BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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"Then the spoon was dipped back into peanut butter licked clean and re-dipped in the jelly." I found Monique sammuts article "Peanut Butter and Jelly" was extremely full of suspence. The way she described going in and out of both jars was sensational. She did a extravagent job giving us a image of what was going on that i myself became hungry. Not only that but, she made this thought she had of where was the spoon before he made her sandwich and licked the spoon? It was undoubtedly the most chills ive got reading a story about making a sandwhich. Not only am i intrested but inspired about the sandwhich making process. A big round of applause for monique and her article but a moment of silence for harambe to. <3

The author's comments:

i was inspired by the art of the sandwhich artist.

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