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The Visions

December 4, 2010
By ladykate100 SILVER, nunda, New York
ladykate100 SILVER, Nunda, New York
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Leona is the only daughter of King Braton. After her mother was killed by Giodin, Leona swores she would kill him too. When her visions lead her to the man she seeks will it be Leona that shall live on?

Katelyn C.

The Visions

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on Aug. 8 2011 at 11:17 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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wow that was sooo kewl! I very nice piece of work! great job! I just posted a new story i wrote called: Alien invasion series book one: the caller. If any of u had time please go check it out and post feedback and comments. It would be much appreciated! Thanks! and keep writing everyone! :)(:

Sunfire BRONZE said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 9:29 pm
Sunfire BRONZE, King George, Virginia
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Very good! The story was entertaining and convincing. I was quite immeresed in the plot. Though at times a little confusing.

The end seemed felt a little rushed, I would have liked the last battle scene to have a little more ommph.

But besides that, super, hoping for more :)

Leann14 GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2010 at 9:53 pm
Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
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very, very nice!!!!!!:)

on Dec. 9 2010 at 11:12 am
ladykate100 SILVER, Nunda, New York
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments
i hope you will like my book