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Envelope is your average 14 year old girl who lives in the simple and boring 54th century - or so she thought. When she's thrown into the Program, she experiences stuff she would have never experienced if she had never fell into the well and got saved by that boy. So how come she's in a time-dome? How come the guy in the cell across from her looks so freakishly familiar? And how come they have robots if the capitol deleted all traces of them?
Acton, Ma, Massachusetts
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Why be the same when you can different?
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With understanding comes wisdom.
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"Every cloud has a silver lining" and "I don't get distracted easil-SQUIRREL!"
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"Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get." ~Forest Gump
OMG Em! Finish the story my mind will explode if you don't! I loved it thought! You are an awesome writer!
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Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real? ~ Albus Dumbledore
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"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."
"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien
"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin
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You eat food for the enjoyment of it; the fact that it helps you stay alive is just a bonus.
The concept you have for this is quite intriguing; I love reading about how things might be in the future. However, I thought that it was a little blunt. Just telling us that cancer's been cured is boring. Try to slip it in somehow. For the first chapter, try to put more spaces in.
I did find it a little confusing, especially with the Any-thing part. I don't get it. And you have a couple of minor grammar mistakes as well.
Don't get me wrong, this is a very good piece of writing; I just think that, if it were to be improved, it would be a much more enjoyable read. Also, if you want, please check out my novel Hunted. You can find it in the most discussed novels section. Great work!
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You can't run out of dreams. Dreams are the start of everything...
I love it! It's fantastic. I love the way you show who Envy, Olive, and Forest are like. And the way you show the world around them.
I can't wait to read more! It's amazing so far!
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it's classy-not classic.