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Kiss MAG

March 29, 2009
By Aryelle PLATINUM, Scottsbluff, Nebraska
Aryelle PLATINUM, Scottsbluff, Nebraska
38 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Kiss me in black and white
With your thick-lashed eyes closed.
Let's make a perfect night
And who but us need know?

Hold me with the sunlight
Of your warm fingertips;
Trailing across my eyes
And stenciling my lips.

I'm an acquired taste,
Yes, a rare vintage wine.
Sip me slowly, don't haste;
I'm worth at least one try.

Let me melt into you
And lose yourself in me;
A world, fleeting and new
That only we can see.

With your arms my lattice
Green ivy I become,
Entwining you in bliss.
We are alike to none.

Kiss me the final time,
I'll breathe you in again.
Until another time,
Until we kiss again.

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on Aug. 23 2010 at 6:00 pm
spitfire213 SILVER, North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In the devil's den i may be, so stab my heart and set me free.

wow, this poem is so descriptive and enchanting! its hard to find a poem that is simply fantastic but still makes you focus on the text. Well done!

on Sep. 27 2009 at 12:07 am
Just_Breathe SILVER, Visalia, California
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Really good :)

on Apr. 23 2009 at 7:43 pm
Dead-eyed-Author SILVER, London, Other
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Amazing! The rhyming and rhythym is so subtle you'd never notice how strong it is. This should be in the magazine, I swear!

on Apr. 22 2009 at 1:27 am
Alpha_Romeo SILVER, Anniston, Alabama
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Wow that is really excellent, you tooka common action and gave it a new view, an emotional separation from the world and I love it soooo much, very good writing I think.

on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:33 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Really awesome!! I like the rhyming and the similes you used!!!