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May 11, 2009
By Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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Intimidated and callow
The mind is set
A willing to impress
Not in league with the others
Not matching their powers
Useing words "I" and "me"
Egotistical narsasist
Imagine something deeper
Start light, crescendo dark
Start shallow, crescendo depth
Flex the mind
Block the stiff
Peal the scab, let it bleed, then heal to a scar
Relinquish the future
Prevail the past

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on Jun. 9 2009 at 6:36 pm
SmileyRiley PLATINUM, Tremont, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"You can be a victor without having victims and you can stand tall without standing on someone"

Wow this is great. i love the depth to it. you commented one of my articles and so i checked out some of your stuff. you are an amazing writer!