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Almost Like Déjà Vu

June 6, 2009
By ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I always used to dream about a world with someone who loved me

Loved me as I am, flaws and all.

Dreamt about a world with someone who would be willing to stay

Up with me for hours talking and listening to what I had to say.

Dreamt about a world with someone who would never be scared

To hold me in his arms when I am scared, confused, upset, or angry.

To kiss me and tell me everything is going to be ok.

To give me advice whenever I am stuck or troubled.

Dreamt about a world with someone who would treat me with

The utmost respect. Respecting my feelings, my spirit, and my body.

Dreamt about a world with someone who made me feel like a

Princess. A world with someone who understands me and make

Me understand myself.

I dreamt of that world and it came true.

Almost like déjà vu.

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This article has 5 comments.

on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:01 pm
sillyaardvarkabc BRONZE, Riverside, Connecticut
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I love this-- it almost seems impossible that a person could be that perfect. However, I think you should try to write more short stories! Your poems are great don't get me wrong, but I think you should try different mediums of writing. Great work!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:20 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

loved the rhythm and the sometimes rhyme. i absolutely agree with despurlock.

on Jan. 7 2010 at 2:02 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

Beautiful! I love it :) And I find this so so so sooooooooo relatable! Again, another 5 stars and a fave! I'm gonna work on readin all your poems because I love them!

tbkeleli said...
on Dec. 26 2009 at 8:12 pm
awww this is a sweet poem. great work. i like how you compared it to deja vu.

on Jun. 24 2009 at 1:02 pm
write4life_0912 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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Dnt we all wish! this is great1 I♥it!