Pain | Teen Ink


July 18, 2009
By 17_*sEcREts*_17 SILVER, Corvallis, Oregon
17_*sEcREts*_17 SILVER, Corvallis, Oregon
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Pain.. its the feeling you get when your alone, the feeling that crattles around your heart, making it weaker and weaker as the days go by, everyday i thought runs through your head saying 'please help me, try to fix me' your head always trys to amke you say it out loud, but the words just wont come out, your heart is begging for mercy, its begging to be let out, its begging for you to cry, it tells you to do so, so you could have a shot at trying to feel better, but, you never could listen, all those days you held in the tears, held in the pain, held in all the signs that screamed for help, it hurt you so much... leading to the day where you walked of that bridge, falling into the cold, silent, still water, you tried so hard to ask for help, but the words could never come out, while you were falling, thats when you felt the kick in your stomach, thats when everything tensed, your eyes widen, you took your last gasp of breath, the second you wished you wouldnt have jumped, you hit the water, and went far deep in the dark abyss.

The author's comments:
I wish i could have helped her, if you didnt understand, she was pregnant, i miss her.

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on Apr. 7 2010 at 7:56 pm
17_*sEcREts*_17 SILVER, Corvallis, Oregon
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its an old peice of my work. but its one of my personal favorites as well. :]

on Feb. 16 2010 at 10:14 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

I understood every bit of it!!! So Sad.... UNDESCRIBEABLE!!!

Anne said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 10:05 pm
thank you ;)

on Sep. 13 2009 at 11:21 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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This is my favourite work of yours. I agree about wishing more people would express thier feelings instead of keeping them inside, even though sometimes that's really hard. I especially like how raw the last part is