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I want

August 1, 2009
By Collado92 PLATINUM, Ft.pierce, Florida
Collado92 PLATINUM, Ft.pierce, Florida
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I want to be the girl you idle
The girl you stare at as if she were a model
I want to be the girl you like
The girl you’d want to take on a date one night
I want to be the girl you can’t get enough of
The girl your addicted to like cocaine
I want to be the girl you’d chase after in the pouring rain
The girl you’d get wet for just to give her something
I want to be the girl you’d wait for
The girl you would be patient for even if she took forever and a day
I want to be the girl you love
The girl you could never let slip away
I just want to be your girl
The girl you come home to each and every day
The girl you love in each and every single way
I just want to be the girl…your girl…your lady.

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on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:33 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

i like this, the way it flowed and how you worded it. i like the simplicity and honesty and truth behind your words. and i can relate very well:) i think we ALL want that. and you did a great job portraying many peoples feelings. nice work

on Aug. 8 2009 at 12:48 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

This one is also a great poem. I don't have much to say though cause this isn't how I feel :) But I love the form you chose, and it gets the points across. Plus the words fit together great!