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My Angel

August 6, 2009
By Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 45 comments

My angel,
I love it when you smile
it brightens my day.
When you laugh,
brings me warmth.
The look in your eyes,
makes me remember the good old days.
But all though your memories cherish me,
it wouldn't stop playing in my head,
like a movie on repeat.

My angel,
you make me blush,
you make me go on a sugar rush.
Every mile away from you,
makes you more visible in my mind.
Thinking about you nonstop,
listening you laugh and look at you smile,
I pry to keep and to be unattached of me.

My angel,
you had opportunities,
some you took advantage,
some not.
But I still love you,
seems now you made you right turn.
You would be free and make your dreams worth.
You took that ungreatful, horrible monkey off.
I'm proud.
You let the great angel take you for a ride.

I cast an angel to fly above,
to see that your protected.
I tell the angel to comfort you at night,
and to bless you.


I thank God,
to have you,
to keep you in my mind because your important.
To me and your family.
It took 7 days to make the world,
make your life last because you do have chances and opportunities.

:) :D

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This article has 3 comments.

on Aug. 16 2009 at 3:49 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Beautiful!! Bravo!! *claps loudly for Dreamer123* My favorite paragraph was the last one! May your dreams take you forever forward!

on Aug. 11 2009 at 4:21 pm
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 45 comments
Thanks. for the comment. thank you so much. :D love your poems too. :D God bless :D

on Aug. 10 2009 at 8:53 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

love this!!!!! Thank you for saying i rock. you rock too. wonderful poem!