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Eyes Like a Dream

August 24, 2009
By annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Look into her gray eyes,
you'll see the clouds.
The dream of the purest of clouds and bluest of skies.
They'll capture your beating heart,
like a cage has encased it.
Your body will never move,
and the world will feel like your standing on a solid stone...
Your eyes will be lost,
and the color will dissipate,
all lost,
like a dream.

The author's comments:
How I write is simple, in a dream,my pure passion that shall never disappear from my heart and for long as my soul is still kicking. =]

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This article has 3 comments.

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 6:59 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 407 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

I really love how you describe your poetry in your description. It shows a drive that most are either lacking or too shy to admit. Nice work.

God bless,


Loveall BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 4:08 pm
Loveall BRONZE, Kansa, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Raven "Nevermore" By E.A. Poe

wow that amazing

on Sep. 4 2009 at 7:54 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

So cool, and I'm totally lovin' it.

Great job, and I'm glad you're still "kicking". lol-Fantastic!