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you said we'd be forever.

September 11, 2009
By Laura_A. GOLD, Etowah, Tennessee
Laura_A. GOLD, Etowah, Tennessee
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forever's not forever
only a brief time
forever's not forever
you weren't forever mine

if forever was forever
you'd still be here
because you said forever
forever's a lie my dear

forever; a week, day, or year
your forever is my fear
forever in my mind
you'll be with me forever
i'm so glad forever is never.

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Sarah_ GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2010 at 12:01 pm
Sarah_ GOLD, Decatur, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
A wise girl kisses but doesn't love she leaves before shes left

keep writing

on Oct. 3 2009 at 1:32 pm
s.nichole. PLATINUM, Ossian, Indiana
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There's something a little innocent about expectancies of forever. It's like promising disappointment. I like this:)

TaraLee said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 1:25 pm
I agree with JaquambiaC...I believe this from my own exprience, also. However, I was the one who lied...

INnaturegirl said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 11:05 pm
i love this poem soo much!!! it's soo true... when a guy says 4ever u can assume that it a lie!!!

on Oct. 2 2009 at 7:06 pm
JaquambiaC. BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Only the strong survive

i really believe this fom my own experiences

on Oct. 2 2009 at 9:39 am
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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this is so good

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:17 am
megan19marie SILVER, Kenton, Ohio
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This was really good!

on Sep. 30 2009 at 9:33 pm
Brittuhhknee BRONZE, North Highlands, California
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i love this poem.i'mcurrently in a relationship and we have said "forever yours" so many times.. its been three month. i know it probably wont be forever but i like to think so. my grandma was in a relationship with her high school sweetheart and it lasted forever. he died and she still loves him. thats what forever means to me.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 11:28 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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rather inspiring, truly good, yes forever is a bit much,but there will always be a forever in mind. so i totally agree with you writng!!!:)

Rain Walker said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:48 pm
Love this...... makes me think

khulse said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:13 pm
like like it but u sould use more intersting words

JessLyn:] said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 1:20 pm
We love this poem....we thought it was soo true and sincear(:

bernia said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:56 am
i thought it was a good poem. i felt that nothing last forever. I think you might have said forever a little to much. but over all it was good.

pepe5769 said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:51 am
I loved the emotion and voice that you put in to this poem. The idea was heartfelt and you could tell.

E and S said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:48 am
I loved you poem. It is sad but is so true. I feel your pain. The peom is well worded and very enotional

rah for life said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:46 am
I think you said forever way a little 2 much i know that u r trying t make a point that you thought you would bo forever but it is a little over done but i like the topic

on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:32 am
diis iis true iit haappend to me =( but ur happy wen iit dosent happen.