Angel | Teen Ink


May 8, 2008
By Anonymous


Angel with wings so fair,
Angel with a heart that cares,
Will you please help my friend?
I think his life is about to end.
Please carry him from Death's cold hands,
And take him to the Promised Land,
Where his soul can fly free,
With fair angels just like thee.

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on Nov. 29 2021 at 9:14 pm
Kingpoet2806 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Her heart was an open book with beautiful pages and detailed lettering. She wanted people to read her story in hopes that it would make them write their own. Instead, every person who came across the pages of her heart ripped out their favorite story and took it with them. They folded back pages and bent up corners. They signed their name with sloppy writing and with a simple 'goodbye'. This book is now tucked away in the darkest parts of her, because no one wants to read a tragic story with a bad ending.

This was amazing, I am at a loss for words

on Aug. 7 2009 at 6:37 pm
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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i really like the poem. it has a lot of heart in it.

:) the rhymes are really good but it also helps to consider timing when you use rhymes.

keep writing poetry!!! :)