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My Love

February 14, 2011
By Maveric SILVER, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
Maveric SILVER, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life happens wat realy matters is what you do to get over the bad times

Huge brown eyes sparkle in the moonlight
As we dance and spend our first night together I find something strange
Somewhere between the dancing and beautiful spring night
I stop looking at her as just another girlfriend
What I see now is the woman I love
She is my love

I see absolute perfection when I look at her
Her loving eyes don’t just see what is on the surface
They pierce deep inside me to who I really am

She is a vision of absolute beauty
The way her thin lips begin to curl into a loving smile
The way the moonlight bounces off her skin
And radiates to give her a heavenly look
Her skin so soft and flawless
Her beauty outshines the sun and the stars
As we slow dance we lean closer
and share our first kiss

The author's comments:
This is about a girl that I think am going to marry one day....unfortunately i messed things up and broke up with her cas her parents didn't like me cas I wasn't their religion and she was getting in trouble for it and it was breaking her heart so I broke it off I hate it when she is sad and I'm not going to stop trying to get her back I will make her happy once again

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jkmannino GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 6:06 pm
jkmannino GOLD, Independence, Louisiana
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Tehe:) i think this poem is amazing Josh:) lol who ever you are talking about must be a really special girl to have your love:) lol and everyone makes mistakes... even me... welllll keep up the good work babe:) lol loveeee yahhhhhhhhhhhh:)