Aww... | Teen Ink


July 8, 2011
By IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Touching you only with my eyes
The way you smile is killer nice
You can see how pretty she is
Her name is all you even hiss
You can see her no matter what
But you can see me only fat

The author's comments:
This is actually made for a contest in a thread in this site but I decided to put it here as well.

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on Aug. 8 2015 at 7:14 pm
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
22 articles 1 photo 259 comments
This is an, good poem but could use some work and maybe make it longer

on Dec. 12 2011 at 6:21 am
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
17 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

There is defininetly a lot of powerful meaning behind this. I love it :D

on Aug. 12 2011 at 10:31 am
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
13 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

I like how it was short but you got your point across

on Aug. 5 2011 at 10:19 am
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

Should even be ever?---okay this poem was short but breathtakingly powerful. i was amzed by how much meaning you put into the short lines! Great!

Emily.L GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 1:00 pm
Emily.L GOLD, Gilbert, Arizona
10 articles 12 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes, we just have to be happy with what people can offer us. Even if it's not what we want, at least it's something. " -Sarah Dessen

I think we can all agree with Shayna. I can see how hurtful that could be to somebody just in those lines.

on Jul. 30 2011 at 7:16 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

I agree with Shayna, the intensity for the length of this poem is incredible.

Shayna121 GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 4:00 pm
Shayna121 GOLD, Port Charlotte, Florida
12 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the master of my fate and the captain of my soul.

Wow...really intense for a brief poem...good job!