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Vampire Spot

March 16, 2012
By Princesspiper84 SILVER, Lodi, New Jersey
Princesspiper84 SILVER, Lodi, New Jersey
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Motto: There's no life without death, mistakes, and missury

I walk into town where the hot spot is.
(By the way its me the girl who fell in love with a vampire)
My sword at my side hidden from everyine else.
My head was down and my hands were in my pocket.
I walked in the vampire bar.

Many tough vampires were arm wrestling and all that junk.
I spit some left over blood in my mouth.
I sit at the edge and looked at the bartender.
"What can I get you gorgeous," He asked me.
"I'm looking for a boy," I lifted my head. "James, Prince James."
"Prince James," The bartender scratched his chin. His red eyes beating at me exzamining me. "If you buy something I'll give you some info."

I leaned my elbow on the bar table.
"Blood," My eyes went furry red. "Animal blood."
The bartender smiled and got the bottle labled animal blood. It looked dusty. It seems no one drinks animal blood. He poored in into a small shot glass.

"That'll be 10 marks," He said holding out his hand.
I went inside my Jacket and ploped a pound of gold coins in his hand.
"Start talking," I said bringing the glass up to my lips.
He leaned in and whispered, "Prince james was here yesterday. I've never seen him like that before, like he was really thirsty. But whatever i gave him he didnt seem to drink."
"Where did he head towards," I asked.

"I cant seem to remeber," He said tapping his chin.
I sighed and plopped another gold coin on the bar.
"Oh i remeber," He pointed east. "He headed towards the dark forest."
I smile and nodded my head. I got up and drank my animal blood and headed towards the dark forest.

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This article has 3 comments.

LexxC SILVER said...
on Jun. 20 2012 at 3:25 pm
LexxC SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Move it or Lose it!

Hey, loving your stuff, this is really good. I just wish you would have continued with the story...!

on May. 9 2012 at 3:28 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I liked this, but in my opinion it belongs in the fiction section more than the poetry section. It captivated me from the start, and are you a human or a vamp? I got kinda confused when you started drinking blood.

Love ya, Rose. You're a great writer, keep it up :))

Kattt BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 11:13 am
Kattt BRONZE, Beford, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"just be your true-self"

i liked but make sure in the beginning of the story to hook your audience so they want to keep on reading :D