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Tangled Up In Eternity

October 1, 2012
By missyEagles BRONZE, Somewhere, Other
missyEagles BRONZE, Somewhere, Other
1 article 0 photos 16 comments

I walk and walk
The silent road running
Beside the river dark.
Thoughtless my mind but in
My heart a fear outlandish lurk.
As i stride the road so clear,
Heaven caressing the end so near,
Dissecting me from everywhere
The unknown hauls me close.
A mile to go yet another.
The road without a start
Takes me further,liberating
Me from reality's embrace.
From dawn till dusk
And dusk till dawn
Its never the end but i go on
To envision myself
Tangled up in eternity.

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on Nov. 26 2012 at 11:29 am
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

i love this poem great job

on Oct. 23 2012 at 10:47 pm
LestyPatrick PLATINUM, Darlington, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Failure is, in a sense, the highway to success, in as much as every discovery of what is false leads us to seek earnestly after what is true, and very fresh experience points out some form of error which we shall afterward carefully avoid"John Keats

Lovely, wonderful diction :)

on Oct. 18 2012 at 7:24 am
alicorn_25 BRONZE, Jonesborough, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
“God does not play dice with the universe; He plays an ineffable game of His own devising, which might be compared, from the perspective of the players, (ie everybody), to being involved in an obscure and complex version of poker in a pitch-dark room, with blank cards, for infinite stakes, with a Dealer who won't tell you the rules, and who smiles all the time.”-Neil Gaiman (Good Omens)

Very beautiful... :)

Sonza SILVER said...
on Oct. 15 2012 at 4:55 am
Sonza SILVER, Bhubaneswar, Other
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Favorite Quote:
An apple a day, if well aimed, keeps the doctor away. - P. G. Wodehouse

i like it!!! i dont if u hav written it about yourself or someone else but i think its about me...........  

WackyK SILVER said...
on Oct. 10 2012 at 12:21 pm
WackyK SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
When the sun sets dont look for it enjoy the moon....the sun will come back when its time is right" - Me

you might be talking about other things but this poem connects to me cause i often take long walks and find myself lost in thoughts and feelings to the point of not really seeing anything around me....deep i like it! wanna see more from u :)

on Oct. 9 2012 at 9:05 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

You're very talented! It's awesome, I really love it! x

Aegis PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 8 2012 at 9:25 am
Aegis PLATINUM, Monroe, Michigan
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In  my opinion, scary. ONly because of the theme that popped in my head. Dark but emotional, neither one is overly done.  I liked it.

on Oct. 7 2012 at 8:21 am
SoullessHeart PLATINUM, New Hampton, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Ƹ̴Ӂ̴Ʒ"I hope you make peace with your pain, and never lose your flames."

This is so amazing:) i plainly love it:)

on Oct. 7 2012 at 4:44 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Thats very well composed!

hypermagical said...
on Oct. 6 2012 at 1:15 pm
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

Haunting, reminds of my own work :P Seriously, though, I love this, 5 stars!

on Oct. 6 2012 at 10:38 am
Lizzi_Wrath SILVER, Lucasville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
I am who i am...Your approval isn't needed.

really, good..keep it up!  

on Oct. 6 2012 at 10:37 am
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
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I sensed a haunting feeling while i was reading it... I love that with this poem. A journey with no end...It's amazing.

on Oct. 5 2012 at 9:39 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

Wow! Great job Suri! I loved it. You had such emotion in it. The title is just intriguing. :)

FinnTheHuman said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 9:01 am
10/10. I really enjoyed this piece of work. :D

on Oct. 5 2012 at 5:23 am
Shnitzal-Face SILVER, Pflugerville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If you fail to prepare... prepare to fail

Very good. Nice scheme and very nice word structure. I loved the first three lines, it set the poem. A great one all around! :D keep it up! 

on Oct. 5 2012 at 4:51 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

This is so nice, it reminds me of the walks I sometimes take at night. you can't see where you are going, and the road seems never ending.