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Its Raining Tonight

April 9, 2013
By romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns

Come hold my hand,
Its raining outside, we should wet our pride
Come hold these hands,
I might ask you something regarding love
Come take these fingers,
Its raining outside, this is the most romantic moment of our life
Did you ever picture? I would request . . . . . . .
Some fact proposing love in this tiring night
Just put behind what’ll happen tomorrow
Lets get dampen in this lovely rainy night
I am not asking you to come outside with me
I am hauling you with my muscular hands on the rain outside
Though I knew you wouldn’t deny, but didn’t make blissful?
I am your weakness, touching your tempting body

Like this rain tonight
Dance with me but there is no music
However the rain is singing to make a amorous night
Hey! Did you see its raining tonight

The author's comments:
the poem is about love

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This article has 8 comments.

on Aug. 10 2013 at 10:57 am
DeathOfAStar GOLD, Kailua, Hawaii
11 articles 1 photo 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Emancipate yourself from mental slavery"

- Bob Marley

Awh it's cute (: 

on Apr. 26 2013 at 11:42 am
Thecurseofdestiel SILVER, Denton, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 19 comments
Someone has Talent!!!

on Apr. 21 2013 at 3:30 am
PriyaModi BRONZE, Indore, Other
1 article 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
I like the way i am,need no transformation,,,LOVE LIFE.

Its fine..gud.

on Apr. 20 2013 at 4:50 am
Just-Another-Girl GOLD, Keighley, Other
17 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
- "A coward may survive...but a hero..a hero lives on in the hearts of the people he saved"

- "Words don't have the power to hurt people, unless the person who said it means a lot"

You say that love is nonsense. I tell you it is no such thing._

Okay, firstly I apologise, I tend to be really critical so please take no offense. I mean maybe its because i hate love in general but I don't know... what i do know is your poem doesnt flow, It's like several seperate statements put in a paragraph... try using connective language to add the the fluency ... secondly, i hate to crush your hopes and dreams but this is unrealstic... once agajn sorry  

on Apr. 19 2013 at 11:08 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:

This poem is really nice. I think you did a great job! 

on Apr. 19 2013 at 2:09 am
romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns

thanx ! ! !

on Apr. 19 2013 at 2:07 am
TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
26 articles 28 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon because even if you miss you'll still end up among the star's

this is actually the best I have read in a while. I'm sure it will be put in the mag one day 

on Apr. 19 2013 at 2:06 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

Aw this one is cute! I really like this one- simple beauty and almost innocent. Very cute again XD