Completion | Teen Ink


March 22, 2009
By Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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If I were a tree,
you are the flowers on my leaves
My love is a line
not a ray
You are the sun
that lightens cloudy days
You are the harmony
to the melody
Completing the song
I thought lost for

The author's comments:
One of my best friends who is a boy is given credit to this poem, When he was out sick and missed school for a week, I was in agony. I soon realized that I couldn't be away from him for more than a few days. He is my other half, the part that completes me.

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Kendrick said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 5:35 pm
Kendrick, Haverhill, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Not all those who wander are lost."

adorable! i think you might be my poetic soulmate.

on Apr. 4 2010 at 8:57 pm
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.

so sweet :) i really like it.