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Drawing Me In

March 24, 2009
By megan39 BRONZE, Bohemia, New York
megan39 BRONZE, Bohemia, New York
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he stares at me with his dark sullen eyes.
his touch was like ice against my skin, the touch of a glacier.
sharp teeth and fast movement, he draws me to him like a moth to a flame.
i need him the way a human beeds air.
everything about him draws me closer to him.
with every touch, he makes my heart beat faster.
with every inch he comes closer to me, i forget to breathe
and when he finally catches me off guard, he makes me into his own.

The author's comments:
uhmmmmm, sorta vampireishhh? not really my best, but i felt like i wanted to put it on. comment!!!!!! (:

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on Aug. 6 2009 at 2:30 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i like it a lot. it was creative,cunning, and it had a sweet spin off of it. you are good! check out and comment on some of my work :)