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our love is blood red.

November 11, 2009
By Sin_incarnate SILVER, Wilmer, Alabama
Sin_incarnate SILVER, Wilmer, Alabama
6 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If a Man strikes you on one cheek, strike him on his other."

-anton lavey

this passion i have
as i stare 'cross the room
unfading, intoxicating,
like poppies in bloom.
the love i once had,
and desire once more
i fall apon the ground
as a tear hits the floor,
oblivious to this oblivion
that grows in my heart
i suffer alone,
because i tore us apart.

i remember,
flesh and blood fused
a lavacious embrace
i kiss soft sanguine lips
set gently upon a face
of white alabaster
soft as doves wings,
as her nails dug in my back
so sweetly it stings

my lifes blood
my lover
never long for another,
always harken to your call
because you are my all,
my greatest acheivement
my sweetest friend,
from now till forever
from here to the end.

The author's comments:
a poem about my ex-girlfriend, no lover, im pretty confused about our relationship right now this is what blooms from my confusion. If you ever read this, i will always love you arielle.

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This article has 3 comments.

Milo! said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 4:19 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

Aleece GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 1:35 pm
Aleece GOLD, Marshfield, Massachusetts
10 articles 1 photo 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm not random, I just have many thoughts!"

that is really good, hope ya'll stay strong


on Dec. 5 2009 at 7:38 pm
Claire_Milan PLATINUM, Waldorf, Maryland
29 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love that we cannot have is the one that lasts the longest, hurts the deepest, and feels the strongest because True Love cannot be found where it truly doesn't exist nor can it be hidden where it truly does."---A wise young man

Awwww......This is so sweet and sincere....I wish someone would write something like this for me....Arielle is a very lucky girl...