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Another emotional poem whoops

November 5, 2014
By Sollucks BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
Sollucks BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Lonely kids

broken heart

anxious teens

bloody art


cold sweat 

useless tears

sad nights

distorted fears 


lost boy 

dull knife

blurred love

sorrowed life


forced smile

clenched fist

dead mind

open wrist


dry lips 

empty sighs

painful screams 

easy lies


shivers run

up my spine 

tied a rope 

"I'm fine"

The author's comments:

A feeling of emptiness is worse than any sadness could ever be

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This article has 3 comments.

Lxcey said...
on Nov. 19 2014 at 4:12 pm
This was genuinely moving and I can relate. Keep it up!

on Nov. 17 2014 at 1:08 pm
Sollucks BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Thank you very much I'll keep it in mind

on Nov. 13 2014 at 12:39 am
ShadowBlossom ELITE, Boca Raton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Memento Mori- It means that nothing lasts forever, no one is immortal, sooner or later you will die and things will come to an end. It also helps you realize that while you are living you should do the most with your life, live life to the fullest.

Your ballad is sad but beautiful and so full of emotions.  I can understand your pain as I have felt the same through my own short life.  If you ever want to talk, I'd be glad to speak and discuss with you.  Hope to read more articles from you!