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Daffodils At Dawn

July 28, 2021
By Ela2611 PLATINUM, Vancouver, Columbia
Ela2611 PLATINUM, Vancouver, Columbia
28 articles 11 photos 11 comments

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Give the ones you love , the wings to fly roots to come by and reasons to stay …….


     Oh! Daffodils at dawn, planted on my 

     neatly trimmed lawn.

     As quite as a fawn .....

     Like a pawn on a chessboard, you are 

     suddenly gone .....

     Almost like you were drawn.

     With one yawn I go to bed.

     Upon a time you were there, 

     Where are you ? Oh ! Daffodils.      
      
     I woke up and realized, it was all a mere

     dream ............

     As I analyzed and energized .........

 

 

 

                                                                 

        
     


The author's comments:

This poem is a true tribute to "Wordsworth". His poem Daffodils inspired me to write this poem. 


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on Aug. 10 at 12:38 pm
Ela2611 PLATINUM, Vancouver, Columbia
28 articles 11 photos 11 comments

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Give the ones you love , the wings to fly roots to come by and reasons to stay …….

Thanks a lot for your positivity and kindness Crazywolfiegirl2! You all are my inspiration . I loved your story
The man with the red eyes and you too Lydiaq your poem Davy ‘s riversong ! And hey ! I hope you guys stay tuned .

on Aug. 10 at 12:37 pm
Ela2611 PLATINUM, Vancouver, Columbia
28 articles 11 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Give the ones you love , the wings to fly roots to come by and reasons to stay …….

Thanks a lot for your positivity and kindness Crazywolfiegirl2! You all are my inspiration . I loved your story
The man with the red eyes and you too Lydiaq your poem Davy ‘s riversong ! And hey ! I hope you guys stay tuned .

on Aug. 10 at 10:49 am
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
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When people first meet me, they think I'm really shy, but by the time they get to know me they wonder how the illusion of shyness ever came around!

Yeah I really like this as well. Also, I thought teenink was just for teenagers, me being 13 myself (I know, young). But I have to say I thought your work was really good before but it is really amazing if it was done by a 10-year-old. You are really creative, and I want you to keep writing (and drawing too 🙃).

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Jul. 31 at 6:41 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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"A word is dead
When it is said
Some say.
I say
It just begins to live
That day."
--Emily Dickenson

I think you have to be 13 to have an account, but thank you, still...

on Jul. 31 at 4:17 pm
Ela2611 PLATINUM, Vancouver, Columbia
28 articles 11 photos 11 comments

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Give the ones you love , the wings to fly roots to come by and reasons to stay …….

Thank you Lydiaq for your positive feedback ! Your poems are beautifully written . My name is Ela and I am 10 years old . I have been a member on teen ink for the past 6 months . I would really appreciate it whenever you have the time to look at my poems the truth that lies within a real family and a true consort !

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Jul. 29 at 10:08 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
100 articles 28 photos 718 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A word is dead
When it is said
Some say.
I say
It just begins to live
That day."
--Emily Dickenson

It is a sweet poem, maybe could use some editing.