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November 22, 2009
By SuPeRfLyy! BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
SuPeRfLyy! BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
4 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I mean worse than usual


What was that?
My body is frozen
As I listen,
My ears strain in the heavy
It was nothing,
It was a mouse,
My body goes limp.
My breath is forced
Out in a gusty sigh.
I close my eyes,
Trying to fall prey
To my exhaustion.


My eyes fly open,
My heart is about to jump
Out of my chest!
My body is rigid
And I am holding my breath to the
Point of explosion!
The silence is dreadful.
I take one last breath,
As my door
Slowly is pushed open.
And wait, as
The shadows call.

The author's comments:
Ever hear a noise in the night, and wonder what it is? You blow it off as nothing, but is it really

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oldest fan said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 5:44 pm
this one spooks me out. It is so vivid.

on Dec. 15 2009 at 3:35 pm
LiGht-ChaseR GOLD, Out There, Oklahoma
11 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Dark is generous, and it is patient, and it always wins, but in the heart of its strength lies weakness: One lone candle is enough to hold it back.
Love is more than a candle.
Love can ignite the stars." -Matthew Stover

I know exactly what you mean! <;D

And I love the last line--it just rings on in your head forever!