Tattered | Teen Ink


November 29, 2009
By LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Tattered skin outside to gain
Unleashing toxins by the rain
Washing over, cleansing skin
Warming, healing myself within

Eyes wide open, watching, staring
Inside the rain; outside I'm daring
Within I'm tightened; Outside I'm strained
The rain pours down me, what I've became

A glint of relaxing
A hint of relief
A tint of gray
in my disbelief

Sticken down by lightening's might
I lay, shocked smile, with my body's ignite
I tremble, convulsions rage through my skin
Inside and out, so tattered I've been

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on Dec. 15 2009 at 1:28 pm
kenickie047 BRONZE, Herndon, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
" Live and love hugs and kisses"

nice... thats pretty intense.. but i love it♥