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The Echo

December 4, 2009
By Poems BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
Poems BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Stepping into an ever expanding field of ignorance..." Richard P. Feynman

“I’m sorry” he whispered
A cold harsh whisper
I’m sorry” he whispered
As the gun went off

The explosion was quiet
The bang was guiltless

“I’m sorry” the smoke whispered
A cold harsh whisper

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on Jul. 23 2011 at 6:21 am
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

It's short, but tells a good story. I like it.