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January 10, 2010
By gnihtlaicositna GOLD, Nova Scotia, Other
gnihtlaicositna GOLD, Nova Scotia, Other
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Warming, loving
I'm alive
I gasp and imagine myself
to fly away with the skies
in all it's loveliness
It's all beautiful
I breathe it in, knowing, holding
Stare at the world
caressing it in my mind
a spirit rustles
it wants to escape
I should let it
We're free
I'm free
Filled. Deliriously content.
I'd love to dance amongst the stars
& frolic in the clouds
feeling full
I don't know how to let it out
I don't want to let it out
Fascinates me
the sound of the music
all music
all sights
Live it
appreciating it's magnificence

Release yourself
Let not your physical shell restrain you
dream among it all
Travel it, explore
I'm alive
and it's so damned beautiful

The author's comments:
Another poem for school

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on Feb. 8 2010 at 7:41 pm
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this is very beautiful! your amazing at explaining the imagery without over explaining, and letting the reader take on its own image, yet the same.