Complicated | Teen Ink


February 10, 2010
By imnotjaye SILVER, Los Angeles, California
imnotjaye SILVER, Los Angeles, California
6 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We live in an age when unnecessary things are our only necessities."
Oscar Wilde
Irish dramatist, novelist, & poet (1854 - 1900)

I see you walking
Down the hallway.
I glimpse you face.
The smile on it makes my
Heart throb.
You are surrounded by people.
There is no way I can talk to you.
I just look.
You are wearing that shirt
That I think looks
Hideous on you,
But it makes me laugh to think
That you think that
You look good in it.
From my eyes, you look like
A sailor.
You are wearing your dark jeans
That you wear
Not too high,
Not too low. Just how
I like them.
You shift your messenger bag
From one shoulder
To the other.
I want to know you,
But I have no courage to
Approach you.
Around you,
My life is so…

The author's comments:
This is a true story poem about me and this guy that I like... enjoy!

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on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:33 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

That was really sweet.  I love the genuine feeling behind the words, the style was very effective, and it flowed nicely.

on Apr. 11 2010 at 1:56 am
JayeMizzles GOLD, Paris, Other
12 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.- Oscar Wilde

thnx :) it rly shows how i feel when he's around

btw its the same person but i had to change my account because they wouldnt sign me on anymore

on Apr. 10 2010 at 10:58 pm
LiveLife2theMax GOLD, Wicklow, Other
12 articles 4 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
-Robert Frost

I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not.
-Kurt Cobain

I love it (:

and its so true

you should be proud, this is really good stuff (: