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Pebbles MAG

March 14, 2010
By BlueFoot GOLD, Reston, Virginia
BlueFoot GOLD, Reston, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Life passes most people by while they're making grand plans for it,"

Meteors dissolving in the atmosphere
broke into thousands of millions of pieces
miles and miles above my head
careening through space
listessly, carelessly, pointlessly
I sat,
sitting beneath,
on a green velvet couch.
failing to see the big picture
painted by waltzing space rocks,
as she walked away
and I broke into thousands of millions of pieces too

The author's comments:
i thought it was ok..but maybe somewhat meaningless. feedback would be appreciated.

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on Jan. 24 2012 at 11:11 am
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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This made sense a little. I think I get what you're saying. It was beautiful.