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that feeling

April 16, 2010
By White-pallet GOLD, Havelock, North Carolina
White-pallet GOLD, Havelock, North Carolina
13 articles 51 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When there is snow on the ground, I like to pretend I'm walking on clouds."

can you feel that? yeah that twisting in my heart.
it's contorting and spreading.
man is it spreading. spreading quicker and quicker.
the hands of time are dieing my dear.
I can't wait any longer. I'm tired of this.
can't you feel it yet?
it pulsating within me. I can not escape it dearest.
what a ugly thing inside me. and just the sight of you feeds
it's insaitiable hunger.
that feeling? oh,
it's the pain caused by you

my 'love'.

The author's comments:
a poem written on a whim about nothing and everything

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on May. 6 2010 at 9:57 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

wow. beautiful. i heard a personality that i havent noticed in any other poem before. i loved it! great work :)