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This Hurts

April 30, 2010
By IDontKNow2010 BRONZE, Carroltton, Texas
IDontKNow2010 BRONZE, Carroltton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Lifes a gamble"-Lil Wayne

I hate your Guts.
After everything I’ve
done for you.
I loved you,
You were something
Once again I Loved you.
You took me through Hell.
I’d never thought I’d meet
a guy like you.
You told me things____
“ No Let Me Finsh!”
You Told me things,
that you have never
told anyone.
Your eyes brought
Me closer to you.
When I see you
My mind fills
With fear.
I can’t trust you.
I’m scared of you
From That Moment
Things wouldn’t be the same.
I told you I would never
do anything
to hurt you.
You told me
you would
never leave
my side.
This Hurts. This Sucks.
It Hurts
Cause for once,
I opened
Up to
Someone that
I thought
Cared for me,
Loved Me,
And Trusted
I opened
my heart
to you and you broke it.
You told me
You couldn’t
Bear hurting
me anymore.
My heart is
with hatred
toward you.
I cry over you.
I lost friends
over you.
My family doesn’t
trust you.
But I still
Loved you.
I belived you
when noone
else did.
My mind plays flashbacks
of me and you.
Once again
I love you.
But not Enough
to do this
You are
like a
im addicted
to you.
This Hurts,
Badly enough
for me
to quit.

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This article has 7 comments.

on Jun. 6 2010 at 11:32 am
Miss.ReNa SILVER, Sacramento, California
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good!!...could be alot better but it was alright....maybe next  time you should read it before put it on ....but its alright keep going!!!

on May. 21 2010 at 9:15 am
FateshiddenWriter GOLD, Williamsburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
if i were the rain could i ever merge with someones heart like the way rain merges with the sky and earth- BLEAH QUOTE

i liked it=]

andd i feel the way the poem describes..

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on May. 20 2010 at 10:17 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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never let critisism put you down i thought this was great... keep it up and take a look at my work :)

on May. 20 2010 at 8:49 pm
Origami_Giraffe, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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To be brutally honest, this sounds more like a drunken rant then a poem. If this is what you were going for, good job. If not, then you might want to consider polishing it up a little. There's a lot of overused turns of phrases, in fact it's pretty much a list of overused phrases. For a poem to be successful, it has to add something new to the table.

on May. 20 2010 at 12:35 pm
instian95 SILVER, Lindsay, California
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its really good...nd i no how u feel...i feel exactly the same...

on May. 20 2010 at 12:27 pm
xXxfantasyxXx BRONZE, Seadrift, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are hurt, simply to make us stronger" "you don't know, you can never be sure, you just take the plunge"-movie called, "Imagine Me an You"

i love this it's amazing!

on May. 20 2010 at 11:08 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.


Love it, has a great flow to it!  :)