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Mouth That Sings

July 19, 2010
By AuntBrit SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
AuntBrit SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
5 articles 28 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'll poke your eyes out til they bleed!!" Peter Maxwell Sessions

Love so sweet
Love so kind
Feel it pulsing all the time
Heart of Gold
Angelic wings
With a mouth that sings of Love

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on Aug. 24 2010 at 11:48 am
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

sometimes it's hard to write a short poem. because when a reader reads a poem as short as this, he/she tends to dwell on every single word. therefore, the writer needs to make every word meaningful. well i think you did a wonderful job at that, and it is a very difficult thing to master. you definitely made every word a prize!!

you can rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!(: