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The 500

September 3, 2010
By BriarRose PLATINUM, Seneca, Illinois
BriarRose PLATINUM, Seneca, Illinois
24 articles 7 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't need a rose. I want a daisy you picked for my hair. I don't want some fancy box of chocolate. I want a pink frosting cookie you made just for me. Lets skip the upscale restaraunt and have a picnic in the park.

My neon pink
Skulls ‘n’ crossbones
Over my head

Pull tight
The bright yellow
That straps
My goggles
To my face

Watch the clock
Grab the wall
Hit the top
Push off

Into a single
Streamline form

Feel the water
Flowing around me
For an instant

Dolphin kick

Three times

Break the surface
With my arms
Pull forward

Follow the pace
Of the song
In my head

And strong

500 meters
10 laps
One race

Almost to the wall
Another stroke

Coil tightly

Take off
Pace myself
For the rest

Keep moving
Never stopping
Never ending

By the sixth lap
The water is ice
To my burning body

Keep moving
Never stopping
Never ending

Scrape my shoulder
Against the hard plastic

The last lap
The home stretch
The most intense
Push off
Pour every ounce of power
Into my burning limbs

Sprint through the water
Faster than ever
Almost flying

Hearing mothering
But my racing heart
And the frenzied water

Powering into the wall
Ripping my goggles off
Staring at the clock

Breathing heavy
Shaking hard
Staring in disbelief

Drain a water bottle
Grab my goggles again
And take off

There is nothing
Like 500’s
In practice

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This article has 3 comments.

PJD17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2011 at 3:49 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I do the best imatation of myself- Ben Folds

Really good poem i like it  i like the rythem of it  keep up the good work

on Mar. 7 2011 at 3:12 pm
Cammie45874 SILVER, Ohio City, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 25 comments
I mean I this poem i think you show so much emotion i can actually see the water around me. keep writing

on Mar. 6 2011 at 9:35 pm
Cammie45874 SILVER, Ohio City, Ohio
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This poem i