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Lonely One

September 6, 2010
By Ghostwriter92 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
Ghostwriter92 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
45 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Your life is a gift. Accept it. No matter how screwed up or how painful it seems to be. Somethings are going to work out as if they were destined to happen... As if they were just meant to be"

Grief has never hit me so hard
Tear after tear falls from my face.
The pain is almost unbearable.
I miss you so much.
It seems like only yesterday we were together.
Now I’m alone. Separated, and all I can do is think about you.
Begging to hear your sweet melodic voice
Wishing to see your understanding eyes
And urging to be around your loving personality
The pain is almost unbearable.
I sink into great despair.
“Please, Please God,” I cry
“Let me see her again.”
There is a great silence.
Days pass
I slowly thin out
Sleep is almost impossible
And again I cry unto God,
“Please, Please God let me see her again!”
As I close my eyes I can hear your voice.
I start seeing an image of you.
Is this real?
I see every moment I had with you.
I quickly open my eyes, but again there is silence.
Slowly, I close my eyes again
I see every moment we had together.
I see your understanding eyes,
Hear your sweet melodic voice,
Feel your loving personality,
But this time my eyes stay shut and never shall I see you again

The author's comments:
I have a very close friend, who came to visit me in Utah, but when she left I became very sad, so I wrote this for her.

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This article has 5 comments.

Anyanka GOLD said...
on Sep. 22 2010 at 1:43 pm
Anyanka GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Evil Willow looked around the room and sighed. "This world's no fun." She grumbled. Good willow looked over at her bitterly. "You noticed that too?"'

I laughed at the end about the finality of her closing her eyes. Wow she must be truly blind to give up everything for something so small. People who become too obsorbed in their memories lose their souls.

on Sep. 21 2010 at 7:53 pm
LunaWingsFlyAway GOLD, Farmingdale, New York
10 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And neither the angels in heaven above,Nor the demons down under the sea,Can ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee
...Of my darling-my darling-my life and my bride.In the sepulchre there by the sea."

-Edgar Allen Poe

its a very beautiful and passionate poem...it gave me goosebumps from the depth...it spoke to me and its an amazing poem keep on wrting...check out my poem and comment

on Sep. 21 2010 at 3:49 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
16 articles 2 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Very nice poem...and very, very sad. All your poems so far seem to be rather emotional and tear provoking, I really like them.

on Sep. 21 2010 at 11:35 am
SKSK1214 BRONZE, Davie, Florida
1 article 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And suddenly we see that love costs all we have and will ever be. Yet its only love which sets us free.", & "If we don't believe theres reason for living then we'll never know."

Very well written. I felt the passion and loss for you in me. If this is how you really feel, god bless you, and im sorry. It really spoke to me.

on Sep. 20 2010 at 8:51 pm
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
12 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eminem: Success is my only option, failure's not

this right here is cold i like the way u put being lonly missing some one keep writting