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death is closer then life

October 4, 2010
By tiger29 SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
tiger29 SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
life is short,injoy the ride..

life is the greatest gift ever
but death is the worst.
life gives you laughter
and death gives you tears
you smile while your alive but as you die you open your eyes at birth but close them at death.why we ask but no anser.
this goes to show death is closer then life

The author's comments:
i was just thinking of the people i lost in my life and thought of the new people i know now that just came into this world and then this peom came to me

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on Oct. 15 2010 at 5:54 pm
LunaWingsFlyAway GOLD, Farmingdale, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"And neither the angels in heaven above,Nor the demons down under the sea,Can ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee
...Of my darling-my darling-my life and my bride.In the sepulchre there by the sea."

-Edgar Allen Poe

i actually really like this poem...its short and simple...but says alot...and like Ameezy pointed out things i never realized befoee

Ameezy BRONZE said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 7:35 pm
Ameezy BRONZE, Amory, Mississippi
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This is really good. I totally got the vibe and it points out things I had never thought of! Good job!

on Oct. 13 2010 at 7:09 pm
missTaco BRONZE, Kingston, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Enjoy Today, because you could die tomorrow

i like it a lot!

Alice_C SILVER said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 7:09 pm
Alice_C SILVER, Edgewood, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
We all have dark secrets, just no one knows them.- Me
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be."-unknown

i like it a lot very well written only mistake is spelling 'answer'