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October 13, 2010
By darling_bre GOLD, Dunellen, New Jersey
darling_bre GOLD, Dunellen, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Darling I have absolutely no idea how an Avatar makes babies..." -William Lucas

One touch.
Your hand wrapped tightly in mine.
And that’s all it took.
Just one glance.
You barely caught my eye.
With that on-coming freight train smile.
That laugh.
That painfully heartbroken laugh.
That amazing melodious laugh,
The laugh that could always lifts me,
Out of the day to day sea of sadness that envelopes me.
It’s one thing I’ll never forget.
Although some days I wish I could.
To think that all my memories,
That I believed to be long since forgotten.
Were brought back in a moment.
By one touch.

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on Oct. 26 2010 at 12:00 pm
SkyLane PLATINUM, Scituate, Massachusetts
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never regret anything that once made you smile.

i love this(: it flows just right and is so moving.

on Oct. 25 2010 at 10:11 pm
Michelle24 GOLD, Riverwoods, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."-Dr. Seuss

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away."-Unknown

Amazing. I love the structure and the last line ties it all together perfectly. Please check out some of my work!

on Oct. 25 2010 at 6:46 pm
fatesknocking GOLD, Solon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Prayers go up and blessings come down.

I love the structure, and I love the last two lines. They tie everything together perfectly.

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on Oct. 24 2010 at 5:55 pm
Wordart SILVER, Arvada, Colorado
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Hate is forgotten love.

Paranoya is the brute strength of fear.

Gum is sticky, like time.

Its good, could you read some of my stuff?

on Oct. 24 2010 at 5:10 pm
russianreader BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Until your good is better and your better is best."

This is so sweet!!!