Eclipse | Teen Ink


October 26, 2010
By Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
16 articles 4 photos 110 comments

Silver Rays of dullest light that shine upon the moon,
Vigorous and jagged lines stitched together…
Breathing deep.
Air is gray and thick,
Sun is black as night,
Someday coming says the sparrow,
Back from noondays time.
Blue is darkened,
Bright is emerald,
Sapphire eyes is dusk.
Waiting for the morning,
Not impetuous.
Aging is paralyzed.

The author's comments:
Again, if it confuses you I am sorry. Its mostly just meaningful to me...:) Please comment.

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Leann14 GOLD said...
on Dec. 30 2010 at 5:55 pm
Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
16 articles 4 photos 110 comments
thank you:)

on Dec. 29 2010 at 5:10 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i really like it. i like the way even though it confuses some people it makes sense to you...thats what a lot of my work is like!! Well done its really..peaceful..if that makes any sense!!!