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December 23, 2010
By ResistMe PLATINUM, New Tazewell, Tennessee
ResistMe PLATINUM, New Tazewell, Tennessee
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Couldn't it have given me hope
to last one more day
I've waited for the division,
I'm setting in stone
and I've waited
here,all alone.

can't find that peace,
I've wanted to search for
I never got the chance..
and I just can't hold onto it anymore.

I fell asleep lonely and hurt,
to a dream where I faded back to the start,
it all went black
they had come to take you away,
I woke to no one but me.

could have been destiny all along,
when I woke from a dream that you were gone.

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on Jun. 1 2011 at 5:05 pm
krarthurs SILVER, Plymouth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
All generous minds have a horror of what are commonly called "Facts". They are the brute beasts of the intellectual domain.
-Thomas Hobbes

This is very deep and powerful. It gave me chills for some reason, that doesn't happen often.

Good job, I enjoyed this poem a lot. If you could at any time check out my new story, Final Regards, I would greatly appreciate the feedback (: