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The Sea

February 19, 2011
By Bookworm7 SILVER, Middletown, New York
Bookworm7 SILVER, Middletown, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Be not afraid of greatness: some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them. -Willian Shakespeare

One day a girl met a sailor
Soon falling in love
They felt like their love was sent from above
Soon enough the sailor had to leave
He said always watch for me
For I am always in the sea
She waited and watched for days on end
Until she could no longer pretend
For she knew where her love be
With her heart in the bottom of
The sea

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on Aug. 6 2011 at 7:29 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

The second line is good but I think it could be better if it's And soon feel in love. Other than that, this poem is touching and so "aw..." Good job to you! :)))