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Never To Awaken

July 1, 2011
By SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

Can't breathe
I need a way out,
this dream is
crazy, insane, a living
I can't escape
some one help
no one can hear
me screaming
with in the
I can't breathe
never to awaken
from this awful
nightmare of

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 8:03 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I like it, but I feel like the end could have been just slightly better. I get why it was what it was, but I don't know... it just doesn't sound completely right to me. It does draw the reader in, though, so kudos on that.

Check out my poems sometime?