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It was Love

August 24, 2011
By Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Let me write you a poem

A story unknown

About a girl and a boy sitting on their throne

He fell for her deeply in 10 seconds flat

She knew her father would be angry at that

She ran away but not too far

He sat steady alone in his car

He was not happy when they were apart

She wasn't either but had to depart

He followed her to the airport with no one around

She had heard nothing except for one sound

He needed to know if she felt the same

She turned around when she heard her name

She ran to him quickly with a fall to the floor

He picked her up swiftly and opened the door

He drove off slowly into the sky above

She grabbed his hand and knew it was love.

The author's comments:
What I hope people will get from this article is don't give up on true love, even if people around you don't think you should give up on your other half.

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This article has 5 comments.

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on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:19 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Really cute but kind of got confused at the end. Other than that it's really nice :)

on Dec. 10 2011 at 2:24 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

very cute poem! againthe syllables make it a little awkward but i still like it!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:12 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

you are amazing Andi I love it.

on Nov. 22 2011 at 6:21 pm
Prometheus PLATINUM, East Aurora, New York
29 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Nice work, reminds me of romeo and juliet.  A bit short, though.


on Sep. 12 2011 at 7:25 pm
XxXBella.AmoreXxX, That Small Suburb By Manhattan., New York
0 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But can you love someone, who doesn't love you back?"

" I'd rather laugh with the sinners, than cry with the saints"

i loved ittt 