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That Morning Breeze

September 8, 2011
By RaquelAnonymous BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
RaquelAnonymous BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
4 articles 12 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm slowly melting inside."

The wind scattered the leaves all over the grass floor
That morning breeze has caused me to want more
On this very Autumn day
I wonder how I have found my way
To jumping on hills of leaves

Dreams rest on clouds
That morning breeze is never loud
On this very Summer day
I hear the cicadas sing as if they pray
For rain to finds its way to earth

A white flawless blanket is all you'll see
Small snowflakes have fallen upon me
On this very Winter day
'I want to build a fire is all you'll want to say
For its too cold, on this not so forgetful day

The floor now blooms into life
Pinks, blues and purples are seen
On this very Spring day
It can make anyone feel gay
There's a rainbow above my head

The author's comments:
I honestly wrote this poem because of boredom. I was sitting in my Science class and I started writing out things. At lunch I edited the poem a bit. You can tell it's kind of random. Sorry about that. I hope you enjoyed it :)

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on Oct. 6 2011 at 8:39 pm
UglyMushroom GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
11 articles 65 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's a monday. I got nothin' goin' on..." ~O. Rogers

Awwwww I love this!!! I love the images it produces and the unique metaphores like the cicadas praying. The only thing is the the last line doen't rhyme and it doen't have a lot to do with the other things expressed in that section, so it sticks out a little for me. Other than that it's awesome and really captures the feel and beauty of this time or the year. Great job!