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Pain On My Window

October 6, 2011
By RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

Pain, pain go away
Don't come back another day
Take the hurt, the sin, the shame
I don't want to play this game.

Dripping down my window slow
I'm now at my new all-time low
It only stops at God knows when
Please let me see the sun again

Pain, pain, go away
Don't come back another day
Take the one who tore apart
The many pieces of my heart

The author's comments:
this was a long time ago all I have to say is: Break up. a bad one lol

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This article has 4 comments.

Dreaa:D BRONZE said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 12:08 am
Dreaa:D BRONZE, Del Rio, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments
Loved It! Great Job!

Acastillo GOLD said...
on Oct. 18 2011 at 8:12 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
11 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because you have flaws, doesn't mean you aren't beautiful ~Zayn Malik

That was beautifully written, nice job!!!

on Oct. 17 2011 at 2:43 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

I agree with the last comment! This is very good! 5/5 stars!

on Oct. 16 2011 at 8:13 pm
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
62 articles 0 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over a garbage can and says 'That's Punk'?, and I say 'No that's trendy'!"- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

A dark take on an old classic, impressive.