Victory | Teen Ink


October 23, 2011
By JamesODalaigh BRONZE, Bandon, Other
JamesODalaigh BRONZE, Bandon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Ever tried. Ever failed. No matter. Try Again. Fail again. Fail better -Samuel Beckett.
Don't be seduced into thinking that that which does not make a profit is without value -Arthur Miller.

The flare in her eye burns
Her anger penetrating her pupil
Her pauses, not for effect, but for fear
Needless to say, her lips: not likely
To tell her own story
But madding raves, outrage.
She identifies with the raven
Crouching on an idle branch
Awaiting her designated moment
To swoop down
And wait for her approaching chance.
Could this be her time
To fly down, grapple, and emerge,

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2012 at 1:03 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I like this a lot. Very well written. Good topic. Job well done.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

A_____ said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:57 pm
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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Very very nice parallel between her and the bird.  I can really see the similarities.  Well done!