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Nature Mother

September 23, 2011
By FluteFreak SILVER, Auburn, Indiana
FluteFreak SILVER, Auburn, Indiana
8 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Insanity just adds a little spice to life!" -Me

I saw her.
I saw her there, standing in the swamp—the place everyone had deemed useless.
Flowers were woven in her hair
Mist surrounded her, clothing her
Her hair was the color of mud
Her eyes a deep brown flecked with green
I watched completely motionless
She looked around at the dead trees and construction equipment
A tear rolled down her cheek.

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This article has 3 comments.

InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 22 2012 at 1:41 am
Ahh, the beauty of simplicity! This is the perfect length for this poem/this idea. Loved it. I definitely agree. Would you comment on my poem titled I am the Mother of War? It follows the same theme, and I would love to get your perspective on my writing/ideas. Great writing.

KCayla GOLD said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 6:14 am
KCayla GOLD, Stillwater, New York
12 articles 2 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I brought a cupcake, and I brought Apollo" - My Best friend, implying that I was like Apollo :D

Wow. I like the description. This is good. People should pay more attention to the enviroment instead of destroying it. I mean I understand that we need the wood but we don'n need so much! Grrrrr deforestation angers me...

Tori.T GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 1:15 am
Tori.T GOLD, Outlook, Washington
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
I Love To Write When I am Down. In Life Writting Will be In Me.

The Title is a little twisted...!! butt I can Understand Good work and She Must Care For mother nature