Louder | Teen Ink


December 5, 2011
By Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
46 articles 17 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I write only because
There is a voice within me
That will not be still.”
-Sylvia Plath

Everything was louder when I
Smiled and you

The hallway sort of closed in and
My large feet seemed so small in my
Black ballet flats
As my shoes clicked
The chatter and noise swirled around my head
I went deaf for a small moment
And then,

I couldn’t hear you anymore.

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on Jul. 5 2012 at 10:29 am
JackTElliott BRONZE, Austin, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Can't is a curse in this household." -Dad

Very unique syntax, I like how you structured the lines. The words although specific also could cover a variety of topics and are relatable in many situations. Keep up the good work!