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End of You

November 19, 2011
By lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
40 articles 5 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

Deep breaths
Deep end
End of life
End of time
Time is up
Time flies by
By my side
By the way
Way to go
Way you smile
Smile at me
Smile through tears
Tears in your eyes
Tears of sorrow
Sorrow and gladness
Sorrow brings joy
Joy of life
Joy to the world
World of darkness
World on a string
String of my heart
String you along
Along with me
Along for the ride
Ride a bike
Ride at night
Night time
Night light
Light up
Light of truth
Truth be told
Truth hurts
Hurts like hell
Hurts like nothing
Nothing special
Nothing at all
All against you
All for one
One kiss
One moment
Moment of inertia
Moment lasts forever
Forever in my heart
Forever and always
Always on my mind
Always you
You lost me
You know

The author's comments:
This is a blitz poem with several meanings behind it.

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on Jan. 11 2012 at 8:05 pm
AceOfAngels BRONZE, Milford, Connecticut
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Truth is rarely pure and never simple~Oscar Wilde

This was so well thought out, simply by how the last word of the end of every other line is the first word for the next two lines. It's so creative. Despite constraints, you managed to put together a piece that I understood. It was like a flashback of all the moments you had together with someone and he's still on your mind despite how he lost you. Great piece

butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 8:57 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
0 articles 0 photos 408 comments
wow! how did you manage to think of this? it is so simple yet so beautiful. amazing piece!

on Dec. 30 2011 at 11:24 am
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
99 articles 33 photos 91 comments
WoW. that is AMAZING!!! it really touched me because i know exactly the feeling haha. i love love love how you crafted that! the way you ran off of the last word in each line to create the next line using it as the first word, interesting. it flows and it has a really nice rhythm, you have alot of talent. i would love your opinion on some of my pieces (none out of the 28 i have submitted so far are published yet though because i just descovered this sight last night) but you seem like you really know what you're talking about when it comes to writing :)

on Dec. 19 2011 at 2:02 pm
ms.nerdalicious GOLD, Orlando, Florida
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A bird doesn't sing because it has an answer, it sings because it has a song."
— Maya Angelou

wow. that does have multiple meanings! :) i like it ... great work!

on Dec. 19 2011 at 1:45 pm
wordjunkie BRONZE, Houston, Texas
1 article 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who say it can't be done should not interrupt those who are doing it.

his is good, it seems sort of like a really interesting take on the thought process of how we think of someone. I really like it, it's interesting.